12b-Mutual Rewrite 2

Near the end of class on April 2nd you will go to the computer lab and pick one of your fellow students rewritings of the paragraph from the Mutual Decision (it’s quoted at the bottom of prompt 12).  Read their revision carefully and compare it to the original passage by Justice McKenna. 

Now, rewrite your fellow students revision, using the same comment button under their post you used to vote on the best rewrite.   After you have finished your rewrite , add a short statement on why you made the changes you did.  Did you notice anything left out, for example, or were their unclear phrases or gramatical mistakes in the original rewriting? 

Once you have finished rewriting one revision, go on to another and do the same thing.